Tuesday, October 21, 2025

A Note on “The Green Sap” (Patraharitham)

             

    

                                     


     

“The Green Sap” (Patraharitham), a collection of poems, published by   Sri Apkari Surya Prakash, shows his typical characteristic features found in his poems such as simple language, clarity, brevity, gentle irony and variety. Yet the remarkable quality of this poetic collection is the poet’s maturity of outlook and ease of handling free verse without any artificial show. The poems about childhood, old age and death are impressive and touch our hearts. Likewise, his faith in the reforming power of poetry and his view of the poet as champion for the oppressed suffering a lot, are superbly expressed. Instead of struggling for artificial effects, the poet speaks naturally and effortlessly in smooth lines of verse just like a friend with intimate tone.

 

 “I want my childhood” (Naa Baalyam Naaku Kaavaali) conveys the nostalgic desire of the poet for childhood days happily spent in the village. “The Village Mother’” (Palle Thalli) is another beautiful poem dealing with the same theme.  The poem “Accident” (Upadravam) is a moving account of the plight of earth-quake-hit people in sharp contrast to the heartless greedy people robbing the dead, and the unfulfilled dreams and empty promises made by the government. The poem “Dreams are sold here” (Ichata Kalalu Ammabadunu) is an encomium on the consoling power of dreams. “Thrilling” is a satire on tastes of people who patronize artificial, unnatural and mass masala films only for filling the fat purses of producers. “Youth” (Yuvatha) records the rebellious and revolutionary zeal of dynamic youth expressing their discontent over the existing system. The long series of verbs in progressive form suggests the ever-continuing struggle of youth. 


 “Tears from Eyes” (Kaatuka Kanti Neeru) is a clarion call for women leading a slavish life under the domination of men and questions the double standards adopted by the society.  “A smile and a leather bag” (Chiru Navvu-Tholu Sanchi) shows the dreary profession of a medical representative who visits many hospitals giving free medical samples to doctors. The irony is that none cares to enquire about his own health and help him. “The question that remained a question” (Prasna Ga Migilina Prasna) describes the plight of the unemployed as well as employed people reeling under the blast of soaring prices. The poet warns all to get prepared to face this problem well in advance. In “The White Paper” (Tella Kagitham) the road becomes the source of inspiration as well as the place for sharing the experiences of common man.  “The Street Park (Veedhi Park) becomes a shelter of the poor, a venue for lovers and a home for the aged and orphaned children. It is also a forum for youth, who anxiously wait with “red anxious eyes’ for a bursting change.


 In “Lifestyle” (Jeevana Shaili), the world is compared to a lodge or inn. A realistic portrait of a person staying in a lodge is described. The mechanical and indifferent attitudes of persons are catalogued in a series of images. At the end, this world is compared to such a lodge.  In “Excitement” (Udrikthatha), the gory scenes of religious violence are sketched in a series of a few striking images. The common people engrossed in daily problems look like scattered leaves. The poet questions in anguish whither human nature fled.  “The agonized cry” (Aartha Nadam) is one more attempt to portray the inexpressible anguish and unspeakable sorrow of a person who lost his kith and kin in the cruel communal riots. The murderers ran way at the approach of police. Those who inflict death on others are themselves afraid of death. “The Protector” (Rakshakudu) is an ironical portrait of a policeman who behaves in a rough and rude manner for his own self-interests and befriends with criminals and exploits the innocent people.

 

“The Plane” (Chitrika) shows the poet’s anguish in a series of images. "The Wound” (Gaayam) consoles the suffering lot with the statement that words canot soothe them since as long as one lives, pain is inevitable. “The Terrors of Life” (Jeevana Bheebhatsam) verbalizes the frustration and feeling of insecurity felt by the common man in this exploiting, competitive world. The poet asserts his support to such suffering lot. “Sojourn” (Majili) is a philosophical poem stating that change is the law of life and death is an inevitable transfer from this world. “A Handful of Days” (Guppedu Rojulu) in the same vein exhorts man not to live mechanically but to live brightly like a torch and leave everlasting imprint on the sands of our land.

 

 “Sweat is my slogan” (Svedam Naa Nadam) glorifies the dignity of labor. Work should be the slogan of our country and revolutions should come out of hard work. Every day is a May Day for bringing new changes in our country. “The Naked Kids” (Bari Baththala Tirige Pillalu)   written in typical Telangana dialect voices out the feelings and aspirations of the poor, illiterate children struggling under poverty and disease. They are neglected by all like stray mushrooms. Yet they wish for a change and believe in equality. “Music” (Sangeetham) is the universal art above the bounds of language, religion and creed. It is the essence of joy, sorrow and separation. “Man” (Manishi) is a mini-poem comparing man’s eyes to deep, blue seas and his heart to a wide blue sky.

 

In “The Wave-Stirred dream” (Ala Repina Kala) the poet recalls his childhood days, the lovely lake embracing the bank, the deer running under shady trees and the gaping cave with carves sculpture of a roaring lion. Though the wave has passed, the artistic impression it created has not faded with time.  “The Wooden Smile” (Koyya Navvu) records the money-minded mentality of modern man who does not care to feel the beauty of natural surroundings. Even his smile is unemotional and wooden.” Green Revolution” (Pachchani Viplavam)  describes the rural women working in the fields. Even nature shares their joys. The fields caress the fields of farm workers; the breeze whistles; Nature with lilting and musical cries of green parrots becomes one with them. “Crowns, Crowns” (Kireetalu, Kireetaalu) is an ironical poem which exposes the pseudo-magnanimous attitude of the leader who doles out crowns of status liberally to his supporters just to gain their favor.” Movement” (Nadaka) presents the optimistic and day-dreaming trend of people in different professions. The poet admonishes that one should move forward and should not make wrong steps. “The Country’s Song” (Desha Ganam) expresses the humanistic and patriotic feelings of the poet. “Man should live for man’s sake.”  “May human feelings live forever like the green sap in green leaves.” For freedom’s sake the poet is ready even to reject heavenly pleasures. “The machine Gun” (Akshara Shataghni) describes the dreadful scene of wars with modern missiles, rockets and chemical weapons. The poet feels that every citizen should become a commander to himself, a fighter to defend his country. In times of insecurity, one has to wield arms whether one likes it or not. 

 "Waterless Eyes" (Neellu Tiragani Kallu) is a brief sketch of a dead poor clerk who toiled hard throughout his life to fight against poverty and roaring hunger. “The Wheel” (Chakram) shows the mighty power of time trudging on our lives. Though everything goes in a routine way, our lives change and wither like dried nuts from the tree. “The Silent Waves” (Alala Nisabdam) and “The Grave” (Samadhi) describe the calm relief after death. “The Fog” (Pogamanchu) again recounts the death-experience after leading hectic, restless life.  “An Encounter with Death” (Mrithyuvutho Mukhamukhi) written in dialogue form ironically ridicules the rampant corruption in the society. Even death is bribed to delay in capturing the life of the poet. “Waiting jackals” (Gothi Kada Nakkalu) deals with the woes of an old man harassed by kith and kin. The old man requests all to let him spend the last days of his life in peace and not kill him every moment waiting eagerly like jackals for their share of property.

 

“Hunger” (Aakali) shows the poet’s strong desire to swallow the wide-spread elemwnts of corruption such as selfish politician, money-minded doctors and illegal hoarders. “Decorating a corpse” (Shavasingaram) expresses the sad realities of life. Even death does not listen to our call till old age comes. Even our kith and kin do not care to listen to our cries till we die. To show off their affection they grandly decorate the corpse.

 

“The Burnt Garden” (Kaali Poyina Thota) is an elegy written on the death of his father, a well-known gentleman who served as the Member of legislative assembly from Nizamabad. His sudden death made the poet dumbfounded with grief. The poet feels proud being born as a son to such a noble father and decides to emulate his father’s ideals in his life. “This generation-my address” (EE Tharame Naa Chirunama) shows the poet’s intimacy with society and Nature, the real source of inspiration.

 

“The Formation of a Poem” (Aksharaakrithi) brings out the poet’s continuous search for novelty of truth, future vision and true feelings hidden in the depth of his heart. Poverty provokes him to fight against injustice perpetrated on the oppressed lot. He chooses words from the real life of people. Like the sun, he awakens society sunk in nightmarish dreams. He does not write for fame and success. He seeks real poetry and waits patiently for it. He wants to be the real song vibrating in the hearts of people. “Oh Poet, waiting for your Poem” (Kavi! Nee Kavitha Kosam) is a long poem recording the curiosity of the downtrodden who are suffering a lot eagerly waiting for the poems which give them solace and infuse in them a new hope and inspire them to action. His poem, like a magical sword, will open a new path. The poet’s silence gave scope for poetasters to write worthless pieces without feeling the pulse of the people. The poet’s poems will open a new path leading to new millennium. His poems will be heard in every heart, reflected in every wave, in every rustling leaf and in every blossom. The poet’s song will awaken the whole race. “The Messenger of Songs” (Paatala Raayabaari) shows the poet as an experiencer of all people’s sufferings and joys. Just like the sun he touches everything. Nothing escapes his notice. In the poet’s heart a thousand suns rise with radiating bright rays. “On the street” (Bazaar Paalu) records the plight of the poor poet whose house is auctioned off throwing him onto the street. Ironically even after his death, he is destined to stand in the open as a statue at the junction of the roads. “The Thirteenth Hour” (Padamudo Ganta) expresses the power of poetry which should not be treated lightly. Poetry is the ore extracted out of the mine of truth; It is the offspring of emotions from the heart.

 

“New Blood” (Koththa Raktham) expresses in a nutshell, the poet’s views about his country and poetry. He aspires for a peaceful new year without bandhs, strikes, communal fights, violence and starving skeleton-like people fighting for the leftovers near the dustbins. He wishes to write simple, heart-touching, unsophisticated poetry without artifice and jugglery of words. It should be new with variety and lively diction. New blood and new poetry are the need of the nation. “The green Sap” (Patraharitham) the title poem, shows the poetic personality of the poet. His thirst for poetry is everlasting and fresh like green sap in leaves. His poetic source is always full without dehydration or emptiness. His words are like steps submerged that show the depth of his feelings. In short, this poetic collection represents the poet’s views and feelings on a variety of themes in a simple and impressive way the essence of his genuine feelings. This book reveals his poetic skills and his response to various problems of life and society.

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  21st October                                        Somaseshu Gutala

   

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